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Post by battlemine69 on Jan 16, 2011 20:01:17 GMT -5
Battlemine69 Tower 2 Story:
As I heard about the miners who didn't return, I Went on ahead to see what happened. There was rumors about a fearsome beast hiding in the depths of the cave. Though despite my fear I went into this cave to see what has happened. On my way I saw many monsters which I called "Kobolds." These kobolds had a wooden club and they were ready to fight. They were remotely easy to kill but it seemed like an endless wave of the kobolds. When I finnaly got though the wave of kobolds. I heard a Roar! I ran though but on my way I saw this Deep Black Gem. It seemed to have an evil magical power. I decided to call this gem the "Zoisite" I have heard of the evil essence gem but its power was to much for someone who could not control its power. I had a wooden staff and these "Magical Creature Claws" and i made a Dark Wand. When I used this Dark Wand it took control of my shadow and attacked. So I decided to call this a "Shadow Wand." Soon After I heard another Roar! Though this time it was with a Scream! It sounded like a local girl!! I ran deeper into the cave and saw a Big Fearsome Beast! He looked like Barney the Allosarus the Local tower Jester!! I saw some petrified miners over near this lake. I saw some water dripping from the ceiling. I decided to drink that water and suddenly my body started releasing holy bubbles! I called my White Lion to come help me defeat this beast! I gave my lion some water to so he wouldn't become petrified. Together me and my lion had to face this challenge. I got on top of my lion and we fought this Purple Creature! The creature tried to bite my but my lion jumped and took the bite for me. My lion fell down and couldn't get up but as soon as He fell I got an idea! I ran up my lion and Jump off his head and I went flying near the Creature! At that moment using my Sacred Celestial Blade, I slash the creatures head off! Then something fell on my head. It was a collar! It said,"Haha Org, Did you like my creature the basilisk I sent after you, If you are reading this you must've survived this fight. Well you wont beat my next creature, Until Next Time, Shasura." My enemy Shasura had wrote this letter. I saw the eye inside this creature called the "Basilisk" and I took its eye. I used this "Evil Eye" to set free the miners and the poor local girl. I have sealed this Memory into the Second Tower.
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Post by Yanger12 on Jan 16, 2011 20:41:36 GMT -5
Im Entering, Im Starting My Legend Right Now!
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Post by Yanger12 on Jan 16, 2011 21:29:54 GMT -5
Yanger12 The Story of T9:
One day I got bored so I decided to go to T8 to explore that mysterious realm. While I was there I saw five mirrors in that tower I didn’t know what they were so I continued. I decided to return home finding noting. The next day I went back, I saw the first mirror and I kept thinking “What can this be?” Then the second mirror appeared, I decided to continue because I knew there were three more yet to come. Then the third mirror appeared I finally thought “Why is this here in the first place?” So I continued to the fourth mirror. I looked closely at it in curiosity as I saw my refection the mirror shined I became cautious and to the last mirror I went. This time I examined the mirror even more, like before it started shining I thought it was a sign. At this last mirror I decided to touch it. To my surprise it was a portal! I flew through what we called reality and landed in a world called the mirror world. Then I saw huge beasts, I killed them both I searched one it had a crystal on the other one I found a thunder crystal. This became a monster named Crystal Gollum. Next time I came across mutated crystal monsters and a mutated mouse, I decided to kill the mouse first. This mouse had two tentacles and they almost paralyzed me so I knew I had to become careful once killed I searched it and I got one of its tentacles, I called it a Mutant Mouse. Then to the mutated crystals I went, I also noticed it had 4 tentacles. When I attacked one it did less damage than normal I became confused. Then I noticed it can’t move and it can’t attack things in the front of it. I found its secrets and killed both of them one I got a tentacle when I searched it on the other I got silver. I decided to call these Ropers. These where the only monsters in the mirror realm, at mirror world’s boss. The boss was a one eyed monster with freighting teeth and tentacles. Then a laser was aimed at me I dodged it then I looked it hit a Mutant Mouse and the mouse turned to stone! I tried my hardest to kill it, dodging all the lasers and tentacles. I made one last move and stabbed the monster’s eye out before the monster died. This monster was named The Beholder. I looked at the eye; the eye was really AN EVIL EYE!! I was shocked with amazement as I thought Basilisk was the only one. I went back into the mirror world that leads to T8, so I decided to call the mirror world T9. I came to the stone outside of T8 just then I got stoned and here is where I’ll stay. Tell Yun she was everything to me. “Org”
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Post by romtu on Jan 17, 2011 1:11:58 GMT -5
Just a quick heads up guys, the story is supposed to be about Org and Yun's journey. You're free to make up details, and please get creative, but you'll get a better score if the story is about them. If you want a little help getting an idea for the backstory of Puppet Guardian, read this page. You're free to edit your post as many times as you want before the deadline, so if you want to make any changes then you can.
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Post by voidusk on Jan 17, 2011 9:04:01 GMT -5
Voidusk Tower VI story:
Org's search to find a way to safeguard the Tree of Life and his dear Yun, led him to a volcano.
He began climbing to the summit. Many animals like bison and mares grazed the muddy grasses. However, a sudden stench of magic rose, the stench of Sashura. The animals once meek, now pounch upon Org.
Org defended himself against these animals. He swung his sword and began to cut them down. However, the animals, exposed to the foul magic, evolved. Bison grew larger, Mares exploded with flames. He was overwhelmed by this onslaught of evil.
Outnumbered, Org fled. He successfully escaped and continued climbing. He then came across a beautiful dog like creature. It had jet black fur and bright yellow eyes. Org drew his sword, prepared to fight if necessary. The dog creature bowed down to Org. Org, stunned, sheathed his sword and walked towards the creature. Org stroked the creatures fur. It seemed to give off a friendly aura. The creature then scooped Org up onto its back and ran towards the summit. A large shadow could be seen appearing at the summit. Org prepared his sword, ready to face whatever that evil shadow was.
The creature raced to the summit with Org on its back. As they reached the summit, a colossal lizard figure stood tall. Its body constantly combusted with fires. It held a huge halberd with a bright stone shining at its blade. Suddenly the giant swung its gigantic halberd and stood in a battle posture. It let out a loud ear piercing screech and charged towards Org and the dog creature. A fierce battle began and the volcano shook, as if afraid of this epic battle.
The dog creature kept attacking the gem on the giant's halberd. Org noticed this and helped the creature. The giant began to rain fires on them. The power of the pair was no match for the giant. However they had dexterity and speed as an advantage. They sped round the giant and attack. The giant, being slow, could not touch them. Then, a large resonating metallic sound hollered through the battlefield as the gem fell off the halberd. The giant screeched out loudly as it began to shrink every passing moment. Org took the chance and pierced the lizard giant in the chest.
The battlefield fell silent as the lizard began to burn away. Org picked up the gem on the ground. Gleaming with red fiery brilliance, Org felt rejuvenated as if it fed him with magic. He summoned some of the gems powers and split it into two. He gave one to the dog creature and told it to safeguard these lands from harm. He laughed; he was talking to a beast. The creature took the gem as if it understood what Org was saying. It then left , travelling down the volcano. Org grasped the gem in his hand, thinking that this magic would serve well in protecting his loved one.
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Post by Zuooooo02 on Jan 17, 2011 9:19:29 GMT -5
Guys if i didnt come there in event on monday can i still win?cause i posted mine so i wish if we can still win.
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Post by puppygirl on Jan 17, 2011 10:54:53 GMT -5
puppygirl Tower 8
Yun, my wife, had been captured by Shasura. Shasura is a evil wizard who must be defeated. This tower is a memory of the place where Yun had lost her life...Shasura's Labratory. I traveled through this dangerous laboratory full of spells and bubbling liquids. Phantom Guardians guarded Shasura's laboratory. I walked on and on in this endless place.
I suddenly froze in my tracks when I heard evil laughter. Shasura was somewhere near by. And he wasn't alone. A screech echoed through the laboratory. I found myself standing in front of the White Dragon, Burisarigon. Shasura had Yun clenched in his arms with a rag around her mouth. She struggled to escape, but I had to defeat Shasura and his dragon before that. "You want to fight eh?" Shasura said as I lunged forward. He dodged my attack. I already knew that Shasura and his dragon were much stronger than me, but I had to save Yun. Shasura took out his long, shiny blade. I climbed up the White Dragon and dug my blade into it's back. It let out the most ear hurting screech ever. The White Dragon breathed out a icy mist that could freeze you. Shasura put his blade pointing at Yun's chest. "No!" I cried. I ran to Shasura and Yun. It was to late. Shasura laughed his evil laugh and disappeared with the dragon. I was left alone with Yun. For the first time, I had been defeated. Yun laid limply on the floor, she had been strangled by Shasura. I held her in my arms, and untied the rag. "I can not survive like this anymore. There is no hope for me to live on," Yun had said these last words to me. She gave my hand a squeeze, and Yun's heart stopped.
I found a magical fruit in my hand that Yun had given to me when she squeezed my hand. This is called the Fruit of Resurrection. It split open and a seed appeared. This seed was the seed of the Tree of Life. Yun had used this to save Ran-Ran, the tortoise. I carried Yun to the Courtyard, outside this tower. I brought her into the Brick Building. Yun laid in a glass case with hundreds and hundreds of flowers with her.
Guardians, as you travel trough Shasura's Labratory be careful. The mirrors in this tower lead to the Mirror World. The White Dragon claims the place where Yun had lost her life his. You must fight the evil Phantom Guardians.
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Post by romtu on Jan 17, 2011 18:33:40 GMT -5
Another quick reminder guys:
To be fair to everyone else who enters, if your story is more than 500 words, unfortunately you will be disqualified.
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Post by djiya01 on Jan 18, 2011 0:10:45 GMT -5
romtu.. wat if we made the paragraphs like this.. "we are.I had to" that will surely decrease our words.. r u about to separate the next sentence to the period (.) before counting it? tnx
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Post by romtu on Jan 18, 2011 1:17:44 GMT -5
That will only be an issue if the person is at right around 500 words. It will hurt their score in the Quality category of judging if it happens.
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voidusk
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Post by voidusk on Jan 18, 2011 5:56:17 GMT -5
Finally cut down my story to 500 words. It was fun to write a story for Org and Yun and for PG but 500 words is not enough for me haha [just saying]
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Post by djiya01 on Jan 18, 2011 6:07:08 GMT -5
i agree with voidusk
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Blahlala
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Post by Blahlala on Jan 18, 2011 16:52:51 GMT -5
Agh my story is so lame when I cut it to 500... It started at 956 words XD I had to remove a huge chunk If we win, may we have unabridged version to post on the website?
OMG CRAP does it have to be only 1 tower?? I'm ok if it was just a few points taken off... Is it DQ? o__o
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Post by romtu on Jan 18, 2011 18:29:11 GMT -5
Well no wonder you couldn't fit the story into 500 words, You won't be disqualified if isn't just about one tower, but honestly you probably won't get a very good score :/
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Post by Blahlala on Jan 18, 2011 20:00:06 GMT -5
Ah, ok. Thanks for confirmation.
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