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Post by romtu on Jan 14, 2011 21:10:59 GMT -5
Winners announced! Click here for the list of winners.Create the Legend Writing ContestIf you've played the game long enough, I'm sure you've read all of the little stones located in every tower. If you've read them, you know that every tower in the game represents a memory from Org and Yun's adventures together. Those stones don't tell the whole story though, and that's where you come in! We want you to write a short story describing the original adventures behind one of the towers of your choice. You can choose whichever tower you want and be creative. Your story may be featured on the website if we really like it. Deadline - Sunday, January 30th at 11:59 PM EST (Click here to see when that is for your timezone)Rules (Read these carefully! They're very important)[/color][/b] - Your story must be 500 words or less according to here. If you choose to include a title, it will count towards your 500 words.
- Put your character's name in your post
- You may only submit one entry.
- You may not edit or post your entry after the deadline, so make sure you get it done early.
Prizes (All of the prizes can be seen here) 1st place: Pale Shining Axe 2nd place: Choice between Seashell Shoes and Pale Shining Helmet 3rd place: Whirlpool Shield JudgingYour stories will be judged by the moderators on the following criteria: Creativity - Is your story unique? Did you take the original story of the tower and make it even better? Fun - Is your story exciting? Funny? Whichever direction you took, it needs to be entertaining and fun. Effort/Quality - Does it look like you really worked hard on your story? If you used lazy writing (like writing "ur" instead of "your" not using capitalization, things like that) then it will count against you. Since not everyone is a native English speaker, we will be very lenient with spelling/grammar.
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Post by Kkeijit on Jan 14, 2011 23:11:36 GMT -5
Do we just paste the story as a reply to this thread?
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Post by gijooijg on Jan 15, 2011 1:32:21 GMT -5
so we must renew the story and make it better...can we pass the story earlier than jan 30??
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Post by romtu on Jan 15, 2011 1:55:53 GMT -5
You just reply here to post your entry. You can post it whenever you want as long it's before the deadline, and you can edit it before the deadline too.
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Post by gijooijg on Jan 15, 2011 2:26:38 GMT -5
ok can we make own titles?
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Post by Kkeijit on Jan 15, 2011 4:47:34 GMT -5
@liisa
It means to acknowledge yourself so they know who wrote the story
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Post by romtu on Jan 15, 2011 6:02:21 GMT -5
I was wondering whether we would have a writing contest,and here it is! ;D I have a question though:it says in the rules to "Include your character's name".What does this mean?Do WE have to be in the story(like if I'm Liisa,then Liisa tells the story)?Or we can tell a story from Yun or Org's point of view,without our PG characters being in the story? Thank you. KK is right, you just need to put your name on the post so that we know who to send prizes to. Your puppet shouldn't be in the story, since the story should take place before Org built the castle and all of the puppets. ok can we make own titles? You can include a title if you want to, but it will count towards your 500 words.
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Post by Zuooooo02 on Jan 15, 2011 9:43:02 GMT -5
T1 from: Zuoo
We already know that t1 is like nature.Many people like Nature because nature keeps us a live.Nature has many plants.lizard,Giant beetle and E.T.C.
These memories are part of the magic, which will revitalize Yun, heal her spirit, and keep her body pure while she rests in the afterlife.Tower I is a remembrance of the mystic forest where she and I exchanged our vows of love and matrimony. And it is where we began our journey to end the curse of Sashura, which has cast such evil upon our lands."
The main thing that t1 is nature because there are many trees that can give us a life."Org and Yun appreciated many things.But most of all,they appreciated nature."Look at preety flowers!
I decided to seal the tower around eight circulated her memories. Her healing spirit, because it is necessary to keep the magic of the body clean. The first tower to seal the space reproduces the mysterious forest of two people is the starting point of the journey.In these woods to our marriage vows, they decided to get rid of the evil around the journey.
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Post by coolliam on Jan 15, 2011 9:48:40 GMT -5
sorry but i am not the school writing type XD
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Post by djiya01 on Jan 15, 2011 21:09:08 GMT -5
Name: djiya01 Tower VII: Ridge of ChasselasIt is now winter and its getting cold now. People still are being terrified by the evil Shasura with his wizardry and the Magic Mirror, which he made for his demonic plans. He is hiding somewhere in his cold, dark laboratory. We need to stop him soon! Yun and I went to a mountain that was surrounded by the mystery of non-stop blizzards, raging throughout the whole year. It was said to be where Shasura was hiding, so we had to take the opportunity to steal the Magic Mirror from Shasura’s hands. The journey to where the evil wizard is hiding was horrendous! We were struck by heavy blizzards. On our way, we encountered a group of wild Winter Wolves. Because of the heavy blizzards, we were weakened and couldn't attack. The wolves started to jump on us, opening their wide jaws and bearing their sharp teeth. But they are frozen and can hardly move. Thankfully, Yun can cast spells with her book to make wolves fall into a deep sleep. She uttered some words that I couldn't understand and the wolves fell asleep. As we neared the top of the mountain, we stumbled a group of Yeti that were strangely raising their hands for some, unknown reason. In our curiosity, we went near to them. But to our surprise, we were frozen stiff!. These normally harmless yetis, were the creatures that were causing the massive blizzards!. After much pondering, yun and I came to the conclusion that shashura was the mastermind behind these deeds. Yun felt angry for these creatures as they were under the influence of Shasura’s control. Shasura turned these cute, harmless yetis into raging beasts!. Yun casted a paralyzing spell, which made Yetis stopped from making blizzards. We decided not to kill Yetis for they were victims, and did not intentionally mean any harm. As we continue on our way, we ran into a white skinned man and woman. Dressed in elaborate, refined clothing. Moving in from far away, they looked at us with bloodthirsty eyes. I had a bad feeling about this. There was an ominous feeling about these 2 people. Wait....they looked somewhat familiar...... Of course! They were the two vampires who swore allegiance to Shashura! We should have known! "What do you want?” said Yun. "Only your lives", the male one replied. Yun casted fire magic to the vampires, which made them weak. I fought the male vampire with swords, and he sliced it into its body. It was injured, but not killed. Yun managed to defeat the other vampire with magic. Yun decided to spare them, for she said, "He who raises another man above himself, is the agent of his own destruction." We interrogated the vampires to where the mirror was. But when they were about to open their mouths, Shasura suddenly appeared. He grabbed the vampires, and immediately disappeared without a trace. Our efforts were in vain, and our quest was not done. We still had to defeat Shasura! ~~~~~~~~~~~END~~~~~~~~~~~~ tnx for reading *edited Characters: Org Yun Shasura Lester and Mirald Yetis Winter wolves
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Post by Tinyy on Jan 15, 2011 23:55:30 GMT -5
Name: Tinyy Tower story: Tower 5 Desert of the Empress Jafar looked at me with an evil smirk on his face. He had my mother in his arm, she was trapped, and gasping for breath as he held her in a headlock. How could he do this? He had been working for the royal desert palace for years, and yet he had turned on my mother and me, my family, and his honor. The entire kingdom had been at peace, and now it is no longer. "Tourmaline," my mother whispers my name, I see tears slowly caressing her cheeks. She reaches into the pocket of her dress. "Y-you can b-beat him." She takes out a small wooden stick with a bright, yellow-glowing gem encrusted in the end. Jafar tries to grab it, but he knocks it into the sand, and it rolled to my feet. I picked up the shining wand and I immediately felt the lightning held within it's core spark through my fingertips. "No!" Jafar began to scream, "The almighty thunder wand! Held in the hands of the Empress shall activate it's power!" My mother let out a small, hopeful smile and Jafar held her tighter. "It is time!" He reached in his coat and held a golden lamp above his head, "Genie! Awaken!" A huge gas erupted from the lamp and a giant genie came out from it's ends. I didn't know what came over me, but all over a sudden, I waved the wand at the Genie and screamed. "Thunder!" A huge lightning strike shot toward the Genie. It almost casually swiped the blast to the side. "Do you really think you can defeat my Genie? This is simply child's play!" said Jafar. And as he said that, his grip loosened my mother. She quickly chanted words I couldn't make out, and all of the sudden sparks flew in all directions. Jafar froze in his tracks, as did the Genie- they had been paralyzed! My mother pushed Jafar's arm away, and came to me. "Tourmaline! Use the thunder wand again!" I bellowed the spell again, but then aimed at both Jafar and the Genie. The Genie turned to gas, and Jafar collapsed onto the ground, unconscious. "Tourmaline! You have done it! You have defeated Jafar, and the palace will return to it's state of peace; you are a hero, my Empress." My mother embraced me and I could feel her warmth. The palace was happy and jubilant.
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Post by johann2010 on Jan 16, 2011 1:55:07 GMT -5
Name: Johann2010
Story: T3
The Jungle Full Of Gold..
"I want to be rich.I want gold.I want gem..I want these items.I want Yun..." Org Said to himself..Yun was just sitting near a rock with flax beside it..Yun said " I wish theres some wooden chair.."..Org Said " I will make one for you my love..".
Travelling in the wonders of the jungle finds gold dust..Near the river some deadly crocodiles eating plants..Org said" Looks Dangerous..Watch out Yun.." Yun said " Waaa! A crocodile! Save me!.." Before Org reach the crocodiles,A giant,yellow bird flying around the crocodiles.." Looks like a strange bird wants Yun as Bird Food!"..Org said to himself..Org tried to kill the big yellow bird but just whirled a wind impact.Org ran away..Org was sad that he didnt save his loved one.He cried..
He tried travelling, looking every corner and even behind banana trees..He was hungry that he took one banana and it looked like Yun..He does not want to eat it cause he really loves Yun..
Travelling until Org found a Leopard. It was friendly and it speaks.."Hello young one..Finding Yun.. I can help you.Come with me.." The Leopard Said..Org Followed the leopard and saw the BIG YELLOW BIRD again..He knew it..It 's a Gryphon!!..Before he attacked the gryphon, He thought to himself " I have poor weapons..What should i do?".
Then Org Dropped his gold and broke into powder.. The Gryphon smell it and Died..It was a victory for Org and Yun..Especially for the leopard..Org made the leopard as pet..Then Org made a chair made of oak and took some flax and gave to Yun to win her heart.
Org said to himself again " I think i won Yun's Heart..And i dont know why all the trees change in the fall..Maybe trees change because of love..".
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Post by nicola2193 on Jan 16, 2011 10:46:38 GMT -5
Name: Nicola2193 Tower Story: Tower 2 Lair of the basilisk long time ago .... really long time ago ... a knight next to his faithful lion ...... undertook a journey to try and strengthen his spirit .... a long journey that he tested the his combat skills and strength of adaptation. He had to endure numerous feats of strength, for which, at times, really thought he could do it ... not the last of those, the most difficult and dangerous it was to take without delay the most terrible fear of the caves found in those times in those places. That day, though very frightened, he decided to go by ... faced various tests and eventually found himself in front of what would never have thought, for which any puppet on earth would have been scared. Waiting for the brave knight .... which was a basilisk gaze could petrify. used all its capabilities but the basilisk was too strong ... decided to use his most powerful weapon ... sword given to him by a powerful sorcerer ... took courage in both hands and started to attack dealt a blow weakened in the eye of the devil which was an easy target and rider speared his sword in the heart of the beast ... Org, that was the name of the rider, was released unharmed by the collision, but was able to return to his kingdom in order to govern justly. Tell me if i win
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Post by moronsnail the slug king on Jan 16, 2011 11:04:09 GMT -5
omg this is so cool i will post mine next week :B
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Post by darkdude1 on Jan 16, 2011 15:55:31 GMT -5
DarkCloud Tower Story:2
The Mysterious Basilisk Cave
As Org continues his journey,he stumbled upon a cave. 'What's in here?,' Org said to himself. He cautiously enters the cave.A loud roar came from within.'I wonder what was that..'Org said quietly.He saw a stone telling him:'Caution. Basilisk Ahead.' "So thats what that roar was!," Org said with a sense of excitement. As Org continues his journey through the cave,he met a Kobold."Who are you young one?" "My name is Org. I have come to take the Evil Eye from the Basilisk." "Then you better take this good luck charm.Not many knights came back after going deeper this cave.Be prepared." As Org continues his quest through the cave,fighting evil monsters within,he finally reaches the Basilisk. "Who dares disturb my slumber?!" "It is I,Org. I have come to take your Evil Eye!" "Then fight for it!" As Org and the Basilisk were fighting,it knocked Org's sword out of his hand! "You'll be sorry you messed with me! Goodbye!" As Org was about to be stoned,a magical shield appeared around him! It was the charm! "Wha-NOO!" Org got up quickly and sprinted to his sword,starting to run toward the Basilisk,avoiding the attacks! "This is for Yun!" "OOOh-...Well done..." With a faint, it died. As Org grabbed its eye,a light shone from it.The gems above the cave rained down from the ceiling Org grabbing them all making him rich! "I should get going," Org said. Org went on to continue his journey.
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