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Post by Yanger12 on Jan 19, 2011 18:39:12 GMT -5
Does this count as being lazy, for example you are doing a story about T2 can you write T2 instead of TII and get the same points?
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Blahlala
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Post by Blahlala on Jan 19, 2011 20:29:54 GMT -5
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Post by romtu on Jan 19, 2011 21:29:02 GMT -5
Does this count as being lazy, for example you are doing a story about T2 can you write T2 instead of TII and get the same points? That would be fine. What I meant by lazy writing is that you need to take the time to write like you would if you had to turn it in for school.
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Post by Yanger12 on Jan 20, 2011 15:19:20 GMT -5
Oh Ty
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Blahlala
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Post by Blahlala on Jan 20, 2011 20:31:30 GMT -5
Author: Blahlala This is an excerpt from my full story. ~~~Tower VIII~~~ Shasura crawled into a hole in the ground, and holding Yun’s hand, I crawled in too, into a mystery. We came into a cave. A cave that looked a lot like the underground, yet its rocks were filled of celestial stars, gleaming without any source of light. Yun took a piece and stuffed it in her bag. In the cave, we found many of our friends, but they were all dressed in the same outfit, and all attempted to hurt us. Without thinking, I dragged Yun into a mirror right next to us. We met with a huge crystal-like golem. It could withstand Yun’s Ice power, and grew stronger with each attack she dealt. “Stop!” I cried. But Yun did not listen. She was in a rage of fury, casting endless spells, and did not notice when the creature backfired on her, using her own magic to pummel her right into a mirror, one that looked like the one we went in earlier. The mirror vanished, and I ran on to find another one. I met fallen angels, failed lab mouses that have been banished. This place was like a landfill of souls banished from heavan. I moved quicker. After a few hours of walking, I came to a mirror, one that looked different from the others. This one had five golden serpents engraved into the face of the mirror, but I had no better choice, and jumped in. I landed on a cold, sleek surface. “You have dodged my little obstacles for quite long, my friend,” I heard a raspy voice say. “But now, you will experience one magic that no one else has ever mastered like I have.” I opened my eyes, and they grew wider as I noticed that it was Shasura, this time with Yun. “Yun-,” I started, but she disappeared in a burst of light, so light against the darkness of the tower. Shasura took her soul, and grew stronger with the strength. I jumped into the mirror, and thought of heaven, where I know Yun should be. I got there just in time, as she departed from the light of this world, into a lifeless rest. I sobbed, and cried 5 tears onto the mirror’s face. The serpents dissolved, and a picture of an apple-like fruit appeared. The picture grew more realistic, until I could finally pick it off the mirror. This was the fruit that Yun used to save Ran-ran, a few days ago. A tear rolled down my cheek onto the fruit. The fruit crinkled, browned, and dried within a few seconds, right in front of my eyes. I stared in horror, but to my surprise, it split in half and revealed the most magnificent seed I have ever seen – crystal blue, and I sensed 1,000 souls looming in it, ready to sprout. I dropped the seed from the skies, and down it fell… and burrowed itself deep in the rich soil of Celestial Castle, where it will sprout in a thousand years. ~~~To be continued, by us Guardians of the Castle in the Celestial Sky~~~
P.S. MS Word says 500words, but your link says 492words. May I add 8 more? ;D
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Post by voidusk on Jan 21, 2011 3:28:20 GMT -5
nice one blah
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puppygirl
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Post by puppygirl on Jan 21, 2011 19:18:39 GMT -5
Are we allowed to change the tower we picked?
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Post by eunice on Jan 21, 2011 19:39:15 GMT -5
I already have a story I will just type it later ....
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Post by eunice on Jan 21, 2011 19:49:25 GMT -5
Are other puppet guardian players are going to vote the best story ?
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Post by eunice on Jan 21, 2011 22:51:39 GMT -5
Name: Eunice Tower 7 Story Ridge of Shasura One day Yun and I were on a jouney on the Ridge of Shasura. We found a fearless wolf.That when you attack him he heals his self. It was a long and terrible fight.We defeated the wolf. After we defeated the wolf the Magic Mirror appeared in his body ....... Yun was curios in the mirror That i told Yun not to touch it but she won't listen When she touched the mirror five yetties appeared. While we were figthing the yetties one of the yetties has frozen me ........ While I was frozen the yetties captured Yun. Yun said Raymond! help me! help me! After Yun was captured I looked everywhere exept the place of the married Vampires......... Lester and Milard the two ferocius vampires. Because of there love they grew stronger and stronger everyday....... While I was walking I saw a note in a bunny's tail it said ''You are going on the right track. But you can't defeatmy two vampires. Signed:Shasura the Great Wizard" Even though the two vampires are stronger than me. But I know that I need to save my loving Yun While I was near to the vampires place all the great Legends appeared. They gave me the things i need to defeat the vampires The Crystal Sheild for protection,The Diamond Amulet and my final items the Paragon Silver Axe it is the strongest weapon to defeat the vampires .... While I was getting closer and closer. There was another note and it was from Yun...... The note said "Please be very careful Raymond the vampires are difficult to defeat. If I were you use the most powerful weapon and you need to do everything Love,Yun After I read the letter.I continued to walk. I arrived at the vampires place OMG The first one to attack me was Milard while Lester was only watching us.... After a long fight I defeated Milard.Lester was so angry he attack me really hard. I knew what I had to do I used my amulet to freeze Lester. I ran as fast as I canto the vampires house there I saw my beloved Yun. After I got her we ran until we have escape the vampires place But our journey is'nt over.The Evil Shasura is still alive and we need to kill her. But it does'nt bother me anymore. because me and Yun are finally back together ^^^^^^^^^THE^^^END^^^^^^^^ Written by : Eunice Good Luck too Everyone
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Post by eunice on Jan 21, 2011 22:54:16 GMT -5
410 Words hahaha
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Post by romtu on Jan 22, 2011 0:12:18 GMT -5
Are we allowed to change the tower we picked? Until the deadline, you're allowed to edit your story as much as you want. You can even delete the whole thing and start over if you want.
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Post by reynalyn on Jan 22, 2011 1:33:33 GMT -5
can i put a little romance?
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Post by reynalyn on Jan 22, 2011 2:57:44 GMT -5
author:reynalyn towerIII: The Golden Jungle
One fine and sunny day,when Yun and I were on a journey. We found a fearless crocodile and a big leopard. without second thought i attack them,while fighting the crocodile the leopard is going near to Yun and i know that they have a plans for Yun.
After I defeated the crocodile,I found out that Yun is not on my side. When i turned around i saw a letter that was sticked on an Oak tree and that was from shasura! saying.. "if you want to see your beloved Yun back,you must defeat My Golden Bird.It is located in Yun's favorite place in the jungle."
After I read it,im so confused because how can I defeat the Bird if I have'nt good enough weapon? but then I came to realize,I must save her no matter what!
I continued to walk and I saw a sparkling area.With my coriousity i went there and guess what?i found an Emerald! EMERALD is one of the most precious gem and it helps to make a book which is the Fog book. Now I'm ready to defeat The Big Golden Bird!
When I'm getting closer to the located area, I saw a vision of Yun saying.."The golden Bird is too dangerous and very difficult to defeat.i love you as much as I love the Tropical Land..be carefull"..
After I saw the vision,i felt happy!and it gaves me strenght.then I whisper "I will my beloved Yun,I love you more." I continued to walk and now i finally saw the Golden Bird..yeah it's true!its really hard to defaeat.. But i need to do eveything jus to defeat you Bird..be ready and I will kill You!
I used my Fog book and it has poisoned the bird.I continued to fight until the bird is getting weaker and weaker.I did everything even my life is in danger..I did'nt noticed that The Big Bird is already died! until I found out that shasura killed it.
I ran so fast to save My Yun..yes! I did it..i saved her.. im so happy..and now,Yun is happy.We are happy. but there's something bothering me..know what is it? It shasura..I need to defeat him soon..very soon..
~~the end~~
(im not expecting that im gonna win on this game.because there's all of you has a great and ideal stories..i just want to express my own stories..GL nd Godbless all)
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Post by eunice on Jan 22, 2011 8:04:36 GMT -5
Nice reynalyn ......
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