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Post by Melancholy on May 29, 2011 8:25:46 GMT -5
Nice try, imposter, but not good enough. =D
And I don't hate old people, I respect them, and lol, moron is like 19.
Again, I WOULDN'T WASTE MY TIME CREATING ANOTHER ACCOUNT ON FORUMS NOR THE GAME, REMEMBER THAT PEOPLE.
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Post by Zandro the woodland elf on Jun 1, 2011 8:15:11 GMT -5
@@ what have i done this is goin serious? anyways guys let us talk bout my debut :B
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Post by spongy on Jun 2, 2011 0:44:23 GMT -5
Hey Zandro I noticed just now , are you moronsnail ?
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Post by Zandro the woodland elf on Jun 3, 2011 6:44:55 GMT -5
guys i need constrctive critism hehe
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Post by Zandro the woodland elf on Jun 4, 2011 9:28:26 GMT -5
guys just updating btw thanks for those who read my manga lol pls do continue to support my work in fb lol
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Post by masaki123 on Jun 4, 2011 10:01:31 GMT -5
Sooo,my dear friendo zandro has drawn a manga.Lets do a short first impression
Personally,I like the catch of it all,but some bits and pieces here are a little bit off course
I have to admit,for a beginner,this is already quite good.Not one of those types of stories in which this guy immediately awakens his power and owns people.The beginning,where the man was hurt by a piece of bread,already shows creativity and potential.
However,what I find not so pleasing was the fact that we meet this guy,cornered,surrounded by a bunch of people.Who is the little boy?Why are these people after him? That sort of question rises in your mind.
The style of drawing is okay,but there is room for improvement.I think you could work on the mouth of Andrei's,and some of the heads were out of proportion (etc last panel of page 17).
Overall,This manga has potential,but it has definitely got room for improvement.If zandro rectify's some bits and pieces here and there,it has the potential to become a great manga
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Post by Zandro the woodland elf on Jun 9, 2011 8:09:52 GMT -5
omg thanks masaki all of you have said makes sense and is helping me alot to grow i appreciate this comment alot thank you very much :B
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